With thousands of talented players competing for limited roster spots, how can you make sure your recruiting emails stand out from the crowd and get you noticed by college coaches?

As a former college player and current coach, I've seen countless recruiting emails over the years—the good, the bad, and the ugly. And let me tell you, the vast majority of them end up in the virtual trash can because they fail to capture the coach's attention or effectively showcase the player's talents and personality.

But don't stress!

I'm here to share with you my top two proven email templates that will help you craft a compelling message and increase your chances of getting a response from college coaches.

These templates have worked wonders for my players, and I know they can do the same for you.

Template 1: The "Highlight Reel" Email

Subject Line: [Graduation Year] [Position] with [Key Stat/Achievement] - [Your Name] Highlights

Dear Coach [Last Name],

My name is [Your Name], and I'm a [graduation year] [position] from [high school] in [city, state]. I've been following your program's success and I'm impressed by [specific team achievement or style of play]. I believe my skills and experience would be a great fit for your team.

I recently [key achievement, e.g., scored X goals, won X award, led team to X result], and I'm excited to bring my [key strengths] to the college level. I've attached my soccer resume and a link to my highlight video, which showcases my best moments on the field.

[Link to your highlight video]

I would love the opportunity to discuss further how I could contribute to your program. Please let me know if you have any questions or if there are any upcoming events where I could demonstrate my abilities in person.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

[Your Name]

[Email]

[Phone Number]

Template 2: The "Personal Connection" Email

Subject Line: [Your Name] - [Graduation Year] [Position] Interested in [University Name] Soccer

Dear Coach [Last Name],

I hope this email finds you well. My name is [Your Name], and I'm a [graduation year] [position] at [high school] in [city, state]. I've been researching your program and I'm highly impressed by [specific aspect of the program that resonates with you, e.g., coaching philosophy, team culture, academic excellence].

I had the pleasure of [personal connection, e.g., meeting one of your players, attending a camp, watching a game], and it only reinforced my belief that [university name] would be an ideal fit for me both athletically and academically. My [key strengths] would allow me to contribute to your team's success while also growing as a player and person.

Attached, you'll find my soccer resume, which highlights my athletic and academic achievements. You can also view my highlight video at [link to your video].

I would be thrilled to have the chance to learn more about your program and discuss how I could be an asset to your team. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or would like to arrange a time to talk further.

Thank you for considering me as a potential recruit. I wish you and your team all the best in the upcoming season.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]

[Email]

[Phone Number]

There you have it—two powerful email templates that will help you capture the attention of college coaches and take your recruiting game to the next level. Remember, the key is to personalize each email, highlight your unique strengths and experiences, and show genuine interest in the program.

Now, what are you waiting for? Get out there and start emailing those coaches! Your college soccer dreams are within reach, and it all starts with a standout recruiting email. You've got this!

Oh, and one more thing before you start writing your own recruiting emails: I've put together a bonus introductory email template that's perfect for those times when you need a more general approach.